You know I loved this!!

You really are a Casanova, Luis!

This makes me wish to be in a tall building and frequent the elevator in some pattern in sync with someone hot and flirtatious.

Yes. Did you read my other fantasy related to an elevator?

I could not figure out how to do a link, so I copied it for you here:

His Scent, Ephemeral yet Etched Deep in Memory

Funny how the mind protects us from trauma and stress by shutting off memories and emotions. I did not understand why I have been so on edge about the MRI my doctor ordered for the pain in my shoulder. They gave me earplugs,…[Read more]

Now, THAT would have been Trouble.

Tell me that would not feel great to do! I’m so in!

Last night was the first this week I finally got into the water. It is in that water, I think about things to do, strategize, write, fantasize. Last night, my thoughts go to how to build the bridge to make three work. We must have been in the same intoxicating waters!

Oh, I think you just wrote the first paragraph of the next bit!

As I walked away, he turned to you and cheerfully said, “shall we take a dip ourselves?”

Thank you, I couldn’t agree more, and exactly what I was going for… I’ll double your wistful sigh 🙂

So this admittedly is not an orgy scene, but lately this is the ‘multiples’ scenario I’ve been thinking the most about and have become increasingly desirous of having. I also realize you were probably hoping to have lots of hot young girls thrown in, so it will likely disappoint on that level as well, but this is my fantasy right now.

Who’s t…[Read more]

I am with you, but this also points at part of the challenge. If it was me, and I am doing this, the head space I would be in, is not one where I would want to be controlling the scene. I feed off of his lust and need and fulfilling it, being the object of desire, being at the mercy of my physical yearning. I would need to be focused on…[Read more]

What an interesting voice on her.

Very sexy, rider. And here’s the magic in which I’ve always believed: if you can imagine the fantasy precisely enough, mind and body, then you’ll make it real.

El, I don’t think there’s anything you can set your energy and imagination on and not turn it into one helluva an adventure… Keep on riding! And bring on the spring!

Loved that, as a fellow cyclists I loved the details, damn those bib straps;)

Amen – everything about that!

Going to download it right now, raises my adrenaline and makes my cunt tight just watching that, I want to rock together and feel my hips move, I get it!

Don’t approach me like a thing. I am a woman grown, I expected to be treated as a fully-fledged capable human being complete with ambitions, emotions and frailties. I know the beauty and complexity of my soul, and though it may be a mystery to the male mind at times, do not fear or shy away from it… else you’ll never learn to truly master…[Read more]

I love this story a lot. In many ways it parallels my own “upbringing” and the conflict that I have at times experienced when trying to “manage” my more primal wants and needs and urges (and of course the considerable guilt that goes with them). I also appreciate lakes response for the same reason, although I would add one other thought to…[Read more]

I really enjoyed that and can’t wait to read your take on the other senses. Don’t forget that touch should also include focus on the body’s energy centers like the nape of the neck, the small of the back. And I think the use and feel of different textures (fur, feathers, spikes) arouse the sense of touch.

I love the idea of using the five senses as the backdrop for this exploration. The things you described are all certainly romantic and sensual and would be lovely to have happen.

Since you asked for feedback, the thing I would say is, I think you could have gotten a more emotional reaction from me, if there was more context.