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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 6 months ago
GRIEF
Nicole sobs softly while gently rubbing Rachel’s arm. A lot of time passes before Nicole finds her voice. Her words fall on deaf ears. Nicole shakes Rachel’s shoulder slowly and is startled by the wide, dead stare looking out into nowhere. Nicole’s fingers automatically move to Rachel’s pulse, which she finds strong, steady, but somewhat accelerated. The alarms are sounding off in her head while she extricates herself from the body lock with Rachel. After another minute of unresponsiveness to her questions, Nicole runs into the bedroom for Alex.
“Sweetheart, wake up, wake up. Something’s wrong with Rachel.”
Alex jerks up to sitting, cursing under his breath at the pain shooting up his shoulder and the throbbing in his sprained ankle. Rubbing his eyes, he asks what happened.
“She was telling me about Emily. And I started crying. Then I started talking to her again but she …… she appears to be catatonic.”
Alex’s blood runs cold. He grabs onto Nicole’s arm to balance himself.
“Do you know about this, Alex? What can we do? What can I do?” She reaches for his crutches, which he grabs, almost tripping and falling over while hobble-racing out to the living area, to the couch where Rachel is still sitting, motionless, and zombie-like.
“I’m not sure, Nic. She told me one night when we were in Chicago, about Emily.” He turns to look at Nicole. His solemn face gripped with fear.
“Then I went to take a shower and when I came back out, I found her out on the terrace. It looked like she was going to jump. I tackled her. I screamed at her. She denied it. She scared the shit out of me. I was yelling at her, she was screaming. I think we were fighting. Then I had her over my lap and I spanked the crap out of her. I finally stopped when my hand couldn’t move any more. She flipped over with this blindingly gorgeous smile on her face. She came out of whatever that was and was on me like white on rice.”
Alex’s good arm reaches out to slap Rachel hard across her arm. She blinks ever so slightly in his direction.
“I think it’s like that patient of yours, Nic, the one who was so brutally abused. Not that Rachel was abused but her response was like what you described with that patient.”
“That’s crazy, Alex.” Nicole gently shakes Rachel again, without response.
“My arm is useless, Nic. You have to help me …. spank her, or you can use that big hairbrush of yours if you have it.”
Nicole shakes her head, “I’ve got nothing but my wallet onto the plane.”
With his good arm, Alex pushes Rachel facedown onto the couch before he yanks her pants and panties down. He pulls her by the hair to face up to look at him.
“Baby, Nic is going to spank you for me because I hurt my arm. Do you want that, Baby?”
Rachel shows the smallest nod.
“Baby wants to feel the bite?”
Nicole stares at the blonde head that bobs a little firmer this time.
“Baby wants twenty? Set of two?”
The blonde tresses dip lower.
Alex’s eyes pierce through Nicole’s stare and Nicole finds her arm and hand bearing down hard on Rachel’s ass cheek.
“I want Baby to count,” Alex tells her quietly.
“One…” Rachel is barely audible.
Alex continues to stare hard at Nicole; her face becomes a mask of concentration, working through her task, following the silent commands from Alex’s expression to escalate the blows. Rachel keeps count with each strike; her voice finally audible at nineteen. Tears start to run down her cheeks by the time Nicole near finishes at the second twenty.
Alex reaches for Nicole’s hand, pulling her close, while he asks Rachel, “Where are we now, Baby?”
“Green, Daddy………… green.”
“Very good, Baby.” Alex turns Rachel over and pulls her up, touching his forehead to hers, whispering to her. She nods and cries and crawls over to Nicole, who holds her in her arms for many long, tender minutes as she sobs, her agonized screams muffled against Nicole’s breasts. Nicole is silent as Rachel clutches her. Nicole’s chin rubs and nuzzles the top of Rachel’s head, and that is when Nicole looks up to see her husband’s tears through the haze of her own.
With trembling fingers, Alex reaches out with his good arm to stroke Nicole’s cheek while his other hand gently soothes Rachel’s ass. Rachel moans, furiously bucking her hips, pushing her face harder and her lips practically latching onto Nicole’s nipple. Nicole inhales deeply, the heady, musky scent of Rachel’s arousal. Alex’s palm is cool against her hot skin. His fingers spreading and massaging down her crack before he pushing a finger into her ass, hard and rough. Rachel’s whimpers changes tone, giving way to a high pitched whine that strikes a deep cord of desire within Nicole who pushes her hand down to find Rachel’s swollen clit, tweaking it hard. Rachel squirms frantically.
“Keep very very still, Baby,” Alex whispers, “and I’ll let you have a reward from Nic.”
Rachel freezes on the spot.
“Give our Baby something nice, Nic.”
He presses his finger even deeper into her ass and then asks, “Do you want it, Baby?”
She lets out a low keening whine.
Nicole draws Rachel’s mouth up to hers, soft and prying. One hand gripping her blonde curls, steadying her, before fingertips press firmly to rub her scalp. A few seconds pass when the glare of blinding lightening spread and spread, back and forth between the two. Nicole groans; she groans loud, erotic, and feral. Rachel inhales frantically in response to how Nicole’s groans vibrate against her lips and echo into her mouth. Tongues licking, they drink in each others cries.
“Give it to me, Baby,” Nicole says while she pinches Rachel’s clit again, just before plunging two fingers into her cunt. Mouth eating mouth. Rachel bucks her hips, fucking Nicole’s fingers. Nicole can feel Rachel’s pussy walls blooming, pounding, pounding with blood, hot and thick. Nicole fights to control herself, working hard to temper down her mouth, kissing Rachel slow and sweet, before giving in to gruff possession. She feels Rachel’s ignominious fucking, her cunt fisting her fingers. Then Rachel’s orgasm screams out of her mouth and sprays out of her pussy.
Your writing is kicking ass Mallory.