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Mallory posted an update in the group
Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 2 months agoNICOLE/ALEX/RACHEL/ADAM STORY
I am soliciting any ideas and requests for what you might like to read next in the story.
I already got a request from lake, who would like to see more character development for Rachel as perhaps, a segue to greater involvement with Nicole. I have ideas along these same lines, deeper relationship between Rachel…[Read more]
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Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 3 months agoFINALLY – NICOLE AND ALEX AND RACHEL
With Nicole’s luggage in tow, Alex follows Nicole and Rachel and several other guests into the hotel elevator.
Rachel slyly whispers to Nicole, “Alex has naughty uses of elevators.”
Nicole chuckles, “I think that’s actually my fault, I ADORE elevators. You are right, he is wicked, but in ways you have not…[Read more]
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I know you waited a long time, and so happy that you think it was worth it.
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Hell, Luis, panting here….!
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ellariasand posted an update in the group
Sex & Music 11 years, 3 months agoA reminder of all the times I raced across town in the middle of the night on my bicycle to meet or chase down a tryst. For all the names I whispered, sighed or shouted as idolatrous prayers late at night.
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What an interesting voice on her.
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Alix James replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 3 months agoAnd without further ado…the moment of truth – or at least the very beginning of it!
And I must say this is quite a beginning!!!
There is sooo much going on here and every ounce of it incredibly rich and complex and filled with anxiety and uncertainty and exhilaration and arousal.
Bravo for delivering a scene with so many details to consider…[Read more]
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 3 months agoPICKING UP NICOLE AT THE AIRPORT
“Looks good. On time. About half an hour, she’d be here.” Alex takes Rachel’s hand and guides her awkwardly toward some seats near the gate. Rachel fidgets quietly until he pulls her close to him. His arm around her waist, her hand on his torso. Their heads close. “I’ve got you,” he reassures her.
From…[Read more]
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“hammering of heart beats and heaving of labored breathes” indeed, you have ratcheted up the emotion to a truly torturous level. Merciless tension makes me squirm.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 4 months agoNICOLE – LEAVING FOR CHICAGO
I don’t know what it is with me and airports and sex. Maybe it goes back to that shameful teenage stunt I pulled on what-was-his-name. I have a standard airport travel uniform: short pleated skirt and my high top Vans. If it is cold, like today, I would wear tights, or the thigh high socks I got on now. If it is…[Read more]
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Amateurs is right! Way to go Nic!!!
Bet they aren’t traveling somewhere to fuck the brains out of their husband, some 20-year old hottie and themselves for the weekend!!!
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I love how you’ve made this a completely erotic ride and all she did was go to the airport :). Really liked this, it conveyed the fun and flirt, and spirit.
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I love how you’ve made this a completely erotic ride and all she did was go to the airport :). Really liked this, it conveyed the fun and flirt, and spirit.
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I love how you’ve made this a completely erotic ride and all she did was go to the airport :). Really liked this, it conveyed the fun and flirt, and spirit.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 4 months agoALEX – WAITING FOR NICOLE
I wake up, momentarily confused by the strange sensation of delicate soft curls around my fingers before my eyes could focus and see Rachel’s low snoring features. I wonder if she could possibly be more exhausted than I am. I smile as I inventory all the different ways we fucked yesterday, starting with what we thought…[Read more]
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Very rich, very provocative, it started great and only gets better and better.
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Yep…his mind is definitely reeling and a bit all over the place! But can you really blame him! Isn’t that at least some part of what such an experience should be about? Just total and complete expression of ones wants and desires? I see all of the things that such an experience might which are positive as much as the risks and potential…[Read more]
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Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 5 months agoRACHEL AND ALEX – CONSUMMATION
Rachel and Alex step into the hotel elevator in a feverish embrace. She can feel the velvety heat of his breath in her hair and hear the flaring of his nostrils as he cradles the top of her head under his chin. Are their heart rates calming or are they climbing? They cling to each other, both barely able to feel…[Read more]
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Great tension, and I again loved that you flashed to Nicole in advance of revealing this side of the story, I found myself still picturing her there in the bed as you described her even while I was reading this, it all feels very connected, which I expect is one of those things that is much harder to do than it appears to be. I think I speak for…[Read more]
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This is great and telling and real and there ARE those moments that they both momentarily slip out of “character” and acknowledge the vulnerability that undoubtedly would exist for both of them in this moment. I really enjoyed imagining myself ravaging and fucking Rachel as if I were him…it would be an incredibly heady moment!!!
-James
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