Great tension, and I again loved that you flashed to Nicole in advance of revealing this side of the story, I found myself still picturing her there in the bed as you described her even while I was reading this, it all feels very connected, which I expect is one of those things that is much harder to do than it appears to be. I think I speak for…[Read more]

This is great and telling and real and there ARE those moments that they both momentarily slip out of “character” and acknowledge the vulnerability that undoubtedly would exist for both of them in this moment. I really enjoyed imagining myself ravaging and fucking Rachel as if I were him…it would be an incredibly heady moment!!!
-James