[lake]

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[Anonymous]

I like that idea because this is bound to get pretty big… Very hot, but big 😉

[Alix James]

WTF?!?! I am so turned on by this I can barely stand it! I remember some back and forth about the possibility of a collaboration, but I am embarassed to admit that I did not realize it was on. And I mean ON!!!!! Having come in after what seems like the troika have each had their turn (and you don’t know how exciting it is to type out my thoughts of the three of you each having a turn!) and reading those instructions/rule a half dozen times, I am so damn confused and way to distracted by what has written at this point to even try and figure out what is going on here. At this point, I give up trying to understand the evolution and I am just going to sit back, relax, start re-reading these (probably jumping from one part of each story to another part in another version in no particular order) and start stoking my cock!!! Every bit of this is that fucking HOT for me! I promise to share which part of the story makes me cum!

[Anonymous]

Sir James you must catch on to these things! I believe while on lake’s misbehaving vacay that she is doing a bit of editing to help smooth over the transitions between the three of us and whom ever else *winking here* decides to join in 😉

[lake]

CHAPTER 10 TROIKE

Many will have one true love in their lifetime, fewer will have two, and as for me i have the pleasure of having two at the same time.
Who so ever has said that you cannot be in love with two individuals at one time clearly has never been. I tell you this because i most certainly am, each bringing to my body, my mind and my soul something different. What one may not give the other does, our relationship together is magical.

Mallory with the beauty of a perfect waterfall on an evening sunset. Flowing ever so smoothly over the rounded rocks at the top of the ledge. She brings to me tenderness, love, and strength. It is with my sacred Mallory that i make love.

While Mistress Lake is my burning goddess of fire. Beautiful in her torment, devouring me like no other. She brings me to the edge and back with authoritative praise and love like no other. It is with Mistress Lake i fuck.

In both of their handwriting the instructions were simple on paper, and beside it the beautiful black velvet box that held my collar. “You are to be naked completely except for your collar pet then be in position at the entry way knelt, thighs spread, fingers laced behind your back and head down. One of us will be in to fetch you at exactly 9pm.”

Tonight i am theirs together, tonight if so willing i may be given to an approved Dominant of their choice for the evening. Tonight they together have decided that i am ready mind, body and soul. The training, the love, and the fucking will all come together for them this night.

My Women have built an underground empire together and i am their supreme example of a trained submissive. They will be hosting their grand opening of their members only club; “More than Passion”.

In position knelt on the mat at the entry way any minute now one of my Women will be coming for me. I strain to hear something…anything but the only thing i can hear is music. I can feel the bass on the floor and although naked i feel like i am in a scorching dessert. My hands are slick with sweat, the wait is what i struggle with it does this to me every time. My Mistress and my heavenly lover have mastered the mind fuck game to perfection. The beautiful way they take turns one against the other sometimes working together against me. It really is beautifully choreographed; the pain and pleasure that they give to me, satisfying my hunger deep within.

The door knob i hear it, god i just want to see which one of my lovers will walk through but i don’t move from position the metal tip flogger is still freshly felt from the last time i did. Mistress Lake is the most thorough Dominant I’ve ever had and i adore her for that. After which Mallory licked every inch of my welts.

Gasping loudly and trying not to look at them they both walked through the door, Mistress in a black latex corset, matching skirt barely covering her softly toned ass, fishnet thigh highs attached to garters and knee high platform boots. Mallory wearing the most exquisite white with black lacy trimmed corset, a matching pencil skirt with white thigh highs and fire engine red stilettos.

Mallory walked by me towards the toy chest, Mistress stopped, placing her finger at my collar bone telling me. “Good girl, your position is beautiful now stand and face me eyes on mine.” I stand and face Mistress feeling the heat from her breath she whispers. “You are mine; you are Mallory’s this is known clearly. Tonight there will be others, there will be expectations and you have your safe word although we know you won’t use it.”

My Women they are my heaven and my hell, and they have a treat planned for me before introductions to the others.

CHAPTER 11 PRELUDE

“We have prepared you in every respect for this night dear slave; have brought you to this moment knowing how the site of you, the feel of you, the taste and smell of you will utterly intoxicate them all.” Mistress purrs as she fastens a heavy leather belt around my waist. There are thin straps that loop down between the top of my thigh and outer lips, which she carefully places, skimming her fingers along my bare skin and setting my insides on fire. I am naked, except for my collar and a pair of padded leather wrists cuffs, which Mistress hooks to the belt, at the edges of my back. Then she leads me gently toward my padded kneeler. I tilt forward to press my knees against it still standing. This puts me slightly off-balance. I can feel my hip, calf, stomach and back muscles working in order to hold myself in the proper position. The effort focuses and calms me, I remember who I am, and I stop shaking. “She looks so serene.” Mallory comments to Lake moving to her side. My eyes are down, knees wide, chest open, but I can see Mistress’ hand reach out to Mallory and I don’t have to see it, to know the smile that they are sharing now and the knowing makes my heart race. A radiant light flush spreads over me, and I imagine that it must look like I have a pink mist clinging to my body.

“Such an exquisite temptation” Lake remarks to no one in particular now staring back at me. Mallory hands her the 10” rubber thong whip that she has pulled from the toy chest before replying most beguilingly,

“I must correct you, for tonight the proper word is not ‘temptation’, but rather ‘offering’”.

Mallory then steps toward kristye. One hand lifts and trailing down is a silk scarf which she begins to trail up and over the front of kristye’s body. As she steps even with kristye the fingertips of her opposite hand reach out and settle on the bottom of kristye’s sternum. As she steps past her hand moves up between kristye’s taut breasts continuing to collar bone, then up and over following the same line as the scarf. A visible shiver runs up kristye’s spine, and triggers a knowing smile from Mallory. She reaches from behind kristye to place both hands flat against the top of kristye’s chest just below the collarbones lowering her mouth at the same time. She uses her lips to taste the bare flesh up and down kristye’s neck. Her breath flows over and between the tiny hairs. When her mouth is just below kristye’s ear she whispers, “Delicious” in a voice that quickens the pulse of everyone close enough to hear it.

The effect on kristye is clear as she inhales deeply, and involuntarily her body starts to lean back towards Mallory like it has decided on its own to close the distance between the two bodies. Her eyes flutter up, and at that exact moment Lake’s whip hand begins to lift up and across her body. The motion completes with a backhanded slashing movement that brings the strands of the whip down on kristye’s tender left thigh, bright pink lines burst across the sensitive skin. The slapping sound slices through the room and the sharp sensation, even fleeting, is enough to quickly re-focus kristye. Mallory takes the opportunity to slide her hands down and has them covering kristye’s breasts, she continues to move them up down and around enjoying the feel of kristye’s nipples dragging across the palm of her hand. Her fingers expertly knead the soft mounds and nipples, purring sounds rumble up and out of kristye. Holding herself upright becomes more effortful, since she has to work against her longing to nestle into Mallory, her breathing grows ragged. Once again Mallory’s mouth and lips and tongue play over the skin of kristye’s neck, back and shoulders, awakening every nerve ending. At the same time one hand begins to traverse the center of kristye’s body caressing the soft skin with the pads of her fingers which turn to point downward as she passes her waistline, pausing momentarily to explore the contours of kristye’s belly, hips and pubic mound before sliding gracefully between her legs.

Hand and teeth, one above, the other below, graze the edges of kristye’s skin, threatening, hovering, and savoring the impossible softness. Even here along the outer lips she can feel the heat and moistness between kristye’s legs. The inherent possibilities create a thrumming in Mallory’s hand, her chest constricts and she groans herself, giving into the skin lust kristye has been fighting against so bravely. She presses the full length of her body against kristye’s back, and one finger on the hand in front breaks rank, dipping down and between and in… and for both women the whole world momentarily comes down to the feel of that one finger burrowing into kristye’s slickness. kristye can’t help but buck has the bottom of her ass and inside of her thighs tighten in response. The motion lifts her and pulls her knees toward each other, the top of her body curves hungrily into Mallory. Thwack! Again the whip bites down, this time across the tender flesh of the right thigh. The surprise jolts the entangled bodies resulting in another finger dropping down to join the other, both drive up hard and deep into kristye’s folds. She moves into and with this divine sensation. Thwack! Thwack! Quickly, left then right in a row, and hard. The skin on kristye’s thighs is burning now and beginning to feel raw. She straightens her body and presses her knees back apart. “Wider”, directs Lake. kristye tilts her ass back and settles deeply into her hips, focusing on the joint, angling obediently to get every millimeter of width possible. This splits her lips creating more of an opening for Mallory who does not miss the opportunity. “That’s much better sweetling. Do remember how you are to serve here tonight.” says Lake.

The pleasure of Mallory’s work, plunging in and out, over and around as she whispers encouragements, mingles with the heightened adrenaline pumping through kristye’s body. She feels a surge of energy, but knows it must be channeled. This makes her slightly frantic and she fights the urge to fuck Mallory’s hand. She begins heaving as the fullness in her cunt and belly and thighs builds. Lake’s hand takes hold under her chin and ever so slowly, so deliberately lifts her face until their eyes meet. Aware that this is their first touch of the evening, Lake marks well the feel of the thin skin at kristye’s jawline and the strength of her pulse just below. kristye’s thighs tighten. Lake’s other hand wraps itself in her hair. Mallory has both hands working furiously. kristye’s cunt twitches. Lake jerks kristye’s head back just as the first orgasm starts to rip through her body. Mallory continues through the orgasm only just barely slowing down, and even then only temporarily.

Perspiration breaks out all over kristye’s body and Lake takes the hand from under kristye’s jaw to run her fingers up and down her sore, unsteady thighs. Soon her fingers move further up. Up and over, caressing Mallory’s busy, wet fingers. Mallory moves one hand to kristye’s thigh, the other to her clit. Everything is so wet. Lake slides two fingers in hooking them upward toward the fingers Mallory is using to work her clit. From the front she can reach further and deeper into kristye’s swollen tunnel, she pushes along the walls feeling her way to the spot she wants. kristye cries out. Lake begins a steady circular pulsing motion. kristye’s body yanks her forward, but Lake’s hand in her hair holds her in place. kristye’s cunt is jumping rhythmically. Mallory snaps, “Cum prettily for us now pet.” kristye’s next orgasm hits her running at full speed, arching kristye’s back and releasing a yell that is all vowels. Her hips shove forward, then pull back, then keep doing that over and over. Lake and Mallory’s hands still on and in her body keep her standing afterwards when her legs buckle. “Oh God” barely audible from kristye as she goes limp and Lake catches her. Lake lifts her up and off her knees to full standing. She’s lightheaded and her legs feel wobbly and unsure. “Beauty, be so kind and unhook our little darling” requests Lake.

Mallory frees kristye’s wrists, and then pulls her ass into her hips, both to enjoy the feel of her sensational ass and to keep her steady. Lake reaches out with a feather touch along kristye’s cheek and then lower, touching each body part slowly, deliberately as it’s mentioned. “Look at how beautiful you are; this tender neck… pert nipples… sloping waist… and graceful ass that I love so much. You know everyone here is yearning for you? They are just outside that door, and they long to bear witness to you, dream of feeling the firmness of your hot thighs, and taste the sweetness of your sex, but you are so much more than that aren’t you? And tonight you are going to show them all your perfection. Do you understand?” as Lake finishes, her hand goes back up to kristye’s jaw.

“Yes” replies kristye, “my submission”

“Yes, my lovely, yes indeed”, comes Lake’s breathy response, in full lust and awe and using every ounce of control not to tighten her grip on kristye’s jaw.

CHAPTER 12 WATERFALL

Mallory runs her hands down kristye’s back, filled with both jealousy and a new brand of lust. kristye never before fucked her fingers like that before. Her pupils never so dilated that they practically swallowed up her eyes. Her cries never so raw or loud. Mallory reached over and pulled Lake’s hand back onto kristye’s jaw. “Make her feel your hold, lake.” Then grabbing kristye’s hair and pulling it back roughly, she whispers into her ear, “Are you going to let me have your ass now?” After lubing her extra appendage quickly, Mallory’s hands grip and dig into the delicious flesh of kristye’s ass, pulling it up and apart. Lake stares at Mallory in a silent reverie, then drops to her knees to pull kristye down by her shoulders bending her over. kristye moans her sexiest moan, feeling Mallory’s hands spread her and the hard hot sensation of that first thrust. Mallory asks her, “Do you want more?”

kristye lets out a gut-wrenching cry into Lake’s mouth; her arms around Lake to hold herself steady. Mallory pulls back and thrust forcefully into kristye again, and again, and again until she could cry out no more but impelled to clench her teeth deep into lake’s shoulder to keep herself from imploding from the blistering white hot pain and exquisite sensations. She holds herself there, deep inside kristye’s core, then stopping her movements, allowing Lake to cup kristye’s pussy in her palm. “Fuck her palm, my love, and fuck my cock,” Mallory tells her in a quiet, low voice.

The pleasure…and pain my Mistress and lover inflicting on me is sometimes more than i think i can bare. Each time that i am taken to the edge where i battle want and need with is this right or wrong.. My Women they show me how my juices drip down my thighs by wiping them across my lips. This delicious torture such an unselfish sensual gift that they give me. Not only are they feeding me my every want, need and desire but after… after is my most precious gift of all. The gift of being allowed to touch them, to kiss and lick them. To explore every inch, every crease of their bodies that i so worship. To show them that i am theirs to do as they so wish. My struggle isn’t how far will i go… it’s with whom.

I am so lost in the rhythms that they have imposed on my body, and it is just when I feel I have lost that last thread that connects me back to the real world, I hear the door open. The music from the other side rushes into the room like a spirit eager to inhabit a new body. I can discern footsteps, but they feel so distant to me so far from my focus, that they don’t register in any real way. All that exists is this cock in my ass, these hands and lips and shoulders against my skin. They are real, they know me and I know them and we ebb and flow as one. Our bodies and scents and minds sliding in and out and over one another.

CHAPTER 13 GUESTS

There were boots at the edge of my vision now, standing immobile. Lake began to stand, sliding her fingers in and out of my mouth pressing down on my tongue, dragging the tip over my lips as she did. Light kisses at the edge of my mouth, taking her time as she worked to extricate herself. I tried to savor them as I should as my heart desired, but with each thrust Mallory was jostling me harshly. I was off balance without Lake to lean directly into and everything was feeling more and more shaky. Once standing Lake’s fingers kept contact with my body, which gave me strength, but as my ass stretched with Mallory’s relentless pounding I was slowly losing my hold. I heard a voice, “Our special guests have been prepared, they are ready now to come in.” I knew the voice, it gave me comfort that it was a friend, that it was Mr. Tinkertoys.

Lake’s fingers dug deeper into my hair and held, almost at the same time Mallory buried herself full in to the hilt and mercifully froze. I cried out because of the fullness, because of the impossible depth, and as I did Lake’s hand began to pull me up by my hair. When my neck was bent back and my chest lifted open and at a 45 degree angle she stopped and then her other hand was on my neck and her lips were just behind my ear.

“Our guests will meet you now, you will be displayed just as you are, naked and wanting, with your ass split wide and penetrated at will. They will see you for exactly what you are… a sexual animal who pushes into her impalement… our toy, our treasure and my slave. They will see it all and more and you will hide nothing. You will serve perfectly and with great precision, you will make us proud, you will make this house strong, and you will take what we allow. Do you understand?”

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