I am soooo loving everything about this…not the least of which is the masochistic tendency of Nicole to not only face the situation head on, but to literally pick up on the most sensitive possible aspects and rub her own face in them…

I literally I imagine Nicole being tied to the bed face up while Alex is fucking Rachel in a way where his coc…[Read more]

Switching back to just this perspective at just this time was brilliant. You have us really on the edge of the seat hungry for what’s going on… Asking many of the same questions as Nicole at the same moment, perfect device.

I like you giving us enough to really start picturing Nicole like this, I like thinking about her naked, clinching, aching there. I think about what everyone of those actions and thoughts feels like when I’ve done them myself and then superimposing thoughts of Nicole’s body over the top. I could have stayed with this even longer. I wonder…[Read more]

Omg… Why didn’t he tell her?!?! I would have been bursting to tell M. He would be so turned on, that was an incredible accomplishment! How can he stand not to tell her?

Ah yes torment and lust, wanting and pleasure, freedom and belonging… NOW we are into it! But they have chosen this path, set themselves on it in no small manner… The deeper questions, motivations, desires will begin playing out now… in one way or another (I would argue by him managing what he shares in this way, it has already begun). So…[Read more]

Yep, I know that feeling… it is a miracle she didn’t crash the car! This is getting me all jumbled thinking about wanting cock and pussy so much at the same time.

Stupidity is better than injury!

I swear I’m not making this up, and I did not do it on purpose, but I rear ended a guy in a Porsche once and he was gorgeous and we did end up dating… Oh and the car was fine, but I was quite late for my class 🙂

The one thing I have learned is there someone out there doing anything and everything!

I did crash a car once driving home from swing (the dance – NOT what you were thinking) camp. I hadn’t seen him(#5) for more than a week and I just kept going faster and faster… The anxiousness and just boiled out of control. I actually couldn’t believe…[Read more]

Omg, it was soooo fun too! There is no way you couldn’t do it if you decided to. Belly dancing is harder than many of the others!

But I doubt I made you blush… yet.

You are a charmer, Luis. Maybe you should be the one to seduce Rachel. I am soliciting ideas. So, how would you do it? Or what do you want to read next?

Holy hell…

Yep, that is definitely working for me. I love the way you are flipping from each point of view and making every step an incredibly inventive erotic experience in and off itself.

I’d have to say steam not sauna cause things are certainly hot and wet over here!

I don’t want to give my ideas, because what you come up with is always better than what I am imagining! And the surprises and twists always floor me! But I’ll ramble for a bit and maybe you can take something from it.

I am totally into the progression of the story, but also very interested in understanding more of the motivations, desires,…[Read more]

My long overdue comments are quite simple. Well played…on many levels, from the awkwardness, to the directness of Alex in asking Rachel to “perform” certain acts for him which he knew (or strongly suspected) would have an immediate and undenyable affect on her arousal…to the start/stop full throttle/full brake abruptness that is a hallmark of the…[Read more]

Sorry about the format here, but when it is read here, the format is messy. For easier reading, go here: http://www.thesexexperiment.com/groups/erotic-collaborations/forum/topic/untitled-for-now/page/2/#post-4558

Ohhh My! I would like to respond with something intelligible, but after reading this, I can’t seem to focus on anything but the thought of Nicole staring at Rachel’s pretty pink pussy while she plays with herself and imagines being fucked by Alex…while she gets fucked by Alex…while Rachel is looking at her face and bodily reactions to being…[Read more]

I hope I included “Alex being taken over by lust, Alex fucking Nicole’s brains out, taking advantage of her arousal.”

This was in large part just virtual although it can powerful enough. I think of this as a baby step in the foreplay.

Lest we forget that sex is a drug…

Luis-
I think you have touched on something with your comment, but I would like to give it a slightly different spin…what I would like to believe is a responsible “dominant mans” view of pushing Nicole to meet Rachel. Apologies in advance to @Mal8899 for attempting to deconstruct her beautiful story in a way that may be less than tittilating,…[Read more]

Fair enough…you are absolutely correct. I guess the honesty partcomes into play when trying to MANAGE how to pursue those…well…primary…motivations!

See…I knew that my trying to analyze this story would miss a few marks…I guess the central question I would have for you Luis is about the differences in social attitudes and mores in…[Read more]

Well, the term “sexual colonialism” is just something I made up, so the fact that you had no idea what it meant has nothing to do with any language barrier, but I think that the rest of your response is very helpful in illustrating the concept that I was trying to put forth in using that term. Follow the heart and override oneself is an…[Read more]

@luis and @A.James, may I ask you gentlemen to use the Comment button instead Reply at this point because the truncated format is getting too difficult to read.

It occurs to me that when we watch movies we often do cheer for exactly this Luis, that the leads ‘should follow their hearts and mortify’. In movies we value and demand romance and courage, expression and passion.

But in real life, so often don’t we do the opposite? Value and encourage being in line, doing what is expected. Building…[Read more]

@alix-james, @luis, @lake : okay I will try to give everyone what they want.

I think what we want most is just for you to not to stop!! 🙂 Whichever way you go, I’m confident it will grip, and squeeze, tease, and please one way or another as it always does.

The subtle building tension for me in this one has me holding my breath. It feels like those moments in the theatre when you know something big is about to…[Read more]

Perhaps trust (
1.reliance on the integrity, strength, ability, surety, etc., of a person or thing; confidence.
2.confident expectation of something; hope.)

@luis you are too funny!

I have a feeling I know what the feeling was that Luis was feeling 🙂

I’m not sure I can handle all this pressure!