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Cinematic Sex 10 years, 9 months agoSo is anyone else watching this new TV Series ‘Satisfaction’. The subtitle is, ‘Can an affair save your marriage?’
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I do not watch any TV. Is the show any good? And as far as the.subtitle goes, affairs are not equal and can save, maintain, not destroy, as well as destroy.
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Relative to straight entertainment value… There are better shows. This one can feel a little slow, a little stiff and contrived. I also am not yet really drawn in by either of the lead male characters. They are both so out of touch with their emotions and their authentic selves, and they rarely show real appreciation, desire, or excitement…[Read more]
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Luis did you I tend for those two statements to be contradictory?
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We vary a bit on this one Luis, I think it’s not as straightforward as that for everyone… For example, I would say affairs saved my marriage. And I would describe my objective in many of my relationships closer to this (which I don’t think requires monogamy):
“Let there be no purpose in friendship save the deepening of the spirit. ~Khalil Gibran
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 9 months agoGRIEF
Nicole sobs softly while gently rubbing Rachel’s arm. A lot of time passes before Nicole finds her voice. Her words fall on deaf ears. Nicole shakes Rachel’s shoulder slowly and is startled by the wide, dead stare looking out into nowhere. Nicole’s fingers automatically move to Rachel’s pulse, which she finds strong, steady, but…[Read more]
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Your writing is kicking ass Mallory.
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Cinematic Sex 10 years, 9 months agoNew to you, @luis?
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Mallory posted an update in the group
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I can’t decide if I think the ‘can’t buy it for yourself’ restriction is brilliant or a shameless gimmick.
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Both!
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Ok people. I am going to give myself a dare and visit the mall to see about the purchasing process of this little interesting trinket.
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Ooo I like this little self dare. Makes me want to see you naked in cuffs. Too bad it’s not a fact that the only place you can purchase one is in NY 🙂
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It was technical to start. I gave him an evil grin and mentioned “locking up.” I think I embarrassed him.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 10 months agoRACHEL – ABOUT EMILY
I curl up almost fetal like against Nicole. Her arms safe and tight around me. Her lips on my hair. My eyes leaking. My voice flooding.
I hated her. I thought I was the only one. I was so relieved, Nicole, when I discovered how much Em hated me.
When I got to high school, my parents hired someone regular. I went out…[Read more]
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We have such similar taste in music! I had this on my playlist forever. I will assign you to do the musical accompaniment.
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Agree with Luis. They are starting to see each other as people, real people, interesting complicated, imperfect… Not just as ‘the other woman’. Has the potential to change everything.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 10 months agoEMILY
Nicole emerges from the shower, wrapping the robe tightly around her. The bedroom is still dark. She stops short, watching Rachel turn Alex over on the king size bed, with the expertise of a seasoned nurse. She straightens the sheets, one side at a time. The covers are then pulled over him like a mother would over her child. Things are…[Read more]
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You are more courageous than you proclaim yourself to be Ms Mallory. Intensity and extremes you both protect against and yet crave… It makes your writing unpredictable and tense… Full of intrigue and surprises.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 10 months agoSPRING BREAK
“Triple, venti, non-fat latte, extra hot,” I tell the barista, giving her my phone to pay for my treat.
Surprisingly today, the wait is minimal. Tasting my drink after I stir in a packet of sugar, my phone rings. I smile, it’s Alex. Wait, am I still pissed at him?
“Hey lover boy, how is spring break?” I ask…[Read more]
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Keep reading to find out.
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Mallory posted an update in the group
Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 10 months agoNICOLE/ALEX/RACHEL/ADAM STORY
I am soliciting any ideas and requests for what you might like to read next in the story.
I already got a request from lake, who would like to see more character development for Rachel as perhaps, a segue to greater involvement with Nicole. I have ideas along these same lines, deeper relationship between Rachel…[Read more]
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 10 years, 11 months agoFINALLY – NICOLE AND ALEX AND RACHEL
With Nicole’s luggage in tow, Alex follows Nicole and Rachel and several other guests into the hotel elevator.
Rachel slyly whispers to Nicole, “Alex has naughty uses of elevators.”
Nicole chuckles, “I think that’s actually my fault, I ADORE elevators. You are right, he is wicked, but in ways you have not…[Read more]
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I know you waited a long time, and so happy that you think it was worth it.
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Hell, Luis, panting here….!
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Alix James replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years agoAnd without further ado…the moment of truth – or at least the very beginning of it!
And I must say this is quite a beginning!!!
There is sooo much going on here and every ounce of it incredibly rich and complex and filled with anxiety and uncertainty and exhilaration and arousal.
Bravo for delivering a scene with so many details to consider…[Read more]
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years agoPICKING UP NICOLE AT THE AIRPORT
“Looks good. On time. About half an hour, she’d be here.” Alex takes Rachel’s hand and guides her awkwardly toward some seats near the gate. Rachel fidgets quietly until he pulls her close to him. His arm around her waist, her hand on his torso. Their heads close. “I’ve got you,” he reassures her.
From…[Read more]
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“hammering of heart beats and heaving of labored breathes” indeed, you have ratcheted up the emotion to a truly torturous level. Merciless tension makes me squirm.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years agoNICOLE – LEAVING FOR CHICAGO
I don’t know what it is with me and airports and sex. Maybe it goes back to that shameful teenage stunt I pulled on what-was-his-name. I have a standard airport travel uniform: short pleated skirt and my high top Vans. If it is cold, like today, I would wear tights, or the thigh high socks I got on now. If it is…[Read more]
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Amateurs is right! Way to go Nic!!!
Bet they aren’t traveling somewhere to fuck the brains out of their husband, some 20-year old hottie and themselves for the weekend!!!
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I love how you’ve made this a completely erotic ride and all she did was go to the airport :). Really liked this, it conveyed the fun and flirt, and spirit.
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I love how you’ve made this a completely erotic ride and all she did was go to the airport :). Really liked this, it conveyed the fun and flirt, and spirit.
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I love how you’ve made this a completely erotic ride and all she did was go to the airport :). Really liked this, it conveyed the fun and flirt, and spirit.
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years agoALEX – WAITING FOR NICOLE
I wake up, momentarily confused by the strange sensation of delicate soft curls around my fingers before my eyes could focus and see Rachel’s low snoring features. I wonder if she could possibly be more exhausted than I am. I smile as I inventory all the different ways we fucked yesterday, starting with what we thought…[Read more]
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Very rich, very provocative, it started great and only gets better and better.
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Yep…his mind is definitely reeling and a bit all over the place! But can you really blame him! Isn’t that at least some part of what such an experience should be about? Just total and complete expression of ones wants and desires? I see all of the things that such an experience might which are positive as much as the risks and potential…[Read more]
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Mallory replied to the topic
Untitled For Now in the forum Erotic Collaborations 11 years, 1 month agoRACHEL AND ALEX – CONSUMMATION
Rachel and Alex step into the hotel elevator in a feverish embrace. She can feel the velvety heat of his breath in her hair and hear the flaring of his nostrils as he cradles the top of her head under his chin. Are their heart rates calming or are they climbing? They cling to each other, both barely able to feel…[Read more]
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Great tension, and I again loved that you flashed to Nicole in advance of revealing this side of the story, I found myself still picturing her there in the bed as you described her even while I was reading this, it all feels very connected, which I expect is one of those things that is much harder to do than it appears to be. I think I speak for…[Read more]
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This is great and telling and real and there ARE those moments that they both momentarily slip out of “character” and acknowledge the vulnerability that undoubtedly would exist for both of them in this moment. I really enjoyed imagining myself ravaging and fucking Rachel as if I were him…it would be an incredibly heady moment!!!
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